When choosing Advanced Editing Services, here is what our clients get:

The final document resembles the original style and flow but there might be some new words and different sentences.

The key differences between advanced and intermediate editing services are the levels of judgment and rewriting involved.

With Advanced Editing Services, the flow of text is improved rather than simply ensuring correct usage and grammar. Some recasts are suggested rather than simply flagging problems and a uniform level, tone and focus may be enforced as specified.

Most documents fall under this category.

• All tasks for intermediate editing
  services
• Check word usage and sentence
  construction
• Simplify long-winded, confusing
  sentences for better clarity, murky
  passages to improve clarity
• Change passive to active voice,
  eliminate jargon
• Eliminate wordiness, triteness
  and inappropriate jargon
• Smooth transitions and moving
  sentences to improve readability
• Assign new levels to heads to
  achieve logical structure
• Suggest (sometimes implement)
  additions and deletions, noting them
  at the sentence and paragraph level
• Make suggestions to the author
  for cuts, additions and
  rearrangements